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Amberzlynnc
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0 posted 2011-10-12 02:28 PM



Strings of all shapes, and all sizes, and sounds
Ring through the air into ears all around
Eyes remained closed and the sound waves invade,
Music like this is the Jack of all trades.

Heart rates incline and relax with such ease,
Six great musicians bring men to their knees
Playing the heartstrings of everyone near,
You might fall in love, or you might fall in tears.

*Amber

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1 posted 2011-10-12 09:07 PM


Playing the heartstrings of everyone near,
You might fall in love, or you might fall in tears.

How very true... I really like this! *S*

jwesley
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2 posted 2011-10-12 09:43 PM


this reminds me that the Renaissance Festival opened last week-end.  Cool writing my friend.

j.

Krawdad
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3 posted 2011-10-12 10:29 PM


or both . . .

good music is hard to beat

JL
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4 posted 2011-10-13 11:15 AM


"You might fall in love, or you might fall in tears."

Yeah, but isn't it worth it?  
Enjoyed.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2011-10-13 12:07 PM


What a way to go. This is lovely, Amber,
and I couldn't agree more!


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2011-10-16 12:50 PM


Enjoyed...James
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