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Open Poetry #47

Drunken Autumn Mysteries

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-10-09 05:58 PM

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Among men
I’m not so ugly
Among women
I’m a troll

Are there particles
That travel faster
Than the speed of light

Why
In falling yellow leaves
Do I see your hair

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-09-2011 11:54 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-09 06:07 PM

Very, very good, Huan. Everything connects into the wherewithal, and the ending is superb.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2011-10-09 06:13 PM

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Thank you

Quite by accident
I seem to have done something
right . . .

Thanks again

John

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-10-11 03:19 AM

Are there particles
That travel faster
Than the speed of light

Thoughts travel faster it seems indeed.

Beautiful!

M

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2011-10-11 10:52 AM

that one CAN see the beauty of ..."your hair" among the falling leaves, bespeaks beauty of soul, my friend - which far exceeds any physical attributes one may or may not have.

enjoyed, as always...

j.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-10-11 07:38 PM

I love your ponderings. Sometimes I see things I have to question the reality of too... and I don't drink...lol

'Enjoyed.

Michael

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