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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-10 08:46 PM

And you would make me dream
dreams I only dare to dream
in the whispers of my sleep
Promises you keep
deep in the weep
of my tears
In your ears
the murmuring of my soul
I am whole

LGR(C)10/10/11

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-10 08:53 PM

This poem made a complete and loving circle, from dreams to tears to being whole. Very well constructed.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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2 posted 2011-10-10 09:03 PM

Thanks buddy...I often go in circles but not on purpose lol!
Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-10-10 09:20 PM

I didn't mean it that way, Lori. I merely thought it was meaningful, but maybe I was reading something that wasn't there.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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4 posted 2011-10-10 09:39 PM

Just a little attempt at humor on my part Jerry. You were dead on and I appreciate the feedback. Sorry I threw you for a loop my friend.

Lori

ebonygirl
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5 posted 2011-10-10 09:39 PM

Love your soul dream, you wrote so real it could be touched.
Ms. E

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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6 posted 2011-10-10 09:56 PM

Whew! Thank you for clearing that up, Lori, I appreciate it.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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7 posted 2011-10-11 04:14 AM

Well ... "the murmuring of the soul" ... was enough already to stir my emotions and what you did with it, is just beautiful.

M

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2011-10-11 01:41 PM

Wow, wow, wow...
Beautiful write.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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9 posted 2011-10-11 07:49 PM

Sounds like a lovely dream to me, and you present it very well.

'Enjoyed the read.

Michael

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