Open Poetry #47 |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
Games and stories, that's what we had Remiscing those moments makes me sad You gave me everything and im glad But somehow, it makes me feel bad. You weren't there when i needed someone You weren't there when a good job was done I've always wished that time will come All our memories will be back somehow. Dad i miss you, yes i do I want so bad to spend again my time with you I wish i could still be that little one Who knows nothing but games and fun. I know it hurts you too Living away from us makes you blue I know i have to understand It's just that, I still need your hand. Mom was always there Loving us, and for that I adore her But still, I feel like something is missing Dad, it's you who'll complete my being. I know I must stand on my own Make my decisions alone And even without you, I must go along Because you taught me to be strong. Still, I need you by my side To praise me and boost my pride Show me how wrong I am And tell me that life is'nt just about fun. You may not be a perfect dad But you're the greatest gift i've ever had Our love, you may not always feel So i'm telling you "ILOVEYOU", and that's for real!!! " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful, open love letter to your Dad, dear Karren. Love the gratitude that is so deeply present. M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful and heartfelt, my friend... and I'll just bet he's always known. j. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Those three little words are so hard for so many to say... especially when stepping out on their own, finally releasing the hands of their parents to come into their own. I'm glad you found the words for your father. Michael |
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