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Open Poetry #47
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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0 posted 2011-10-08 10:46 PM

There is something about this poem that need fixing. Sorry . . .
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-10-08 10:56 PM

Looking on the bright side again, eh? Chilling forecast ya got there sunshine...
Lori
JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-10-08 11:05 PM

Yeah, you're right, Lori. I need to work on it. Sunshine might take exception to using her name in regard to mine,

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~
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