»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #47
»
swallow sounds in whispers
| Open Poetry #47 |
|
swallow sounds in whispers |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
we spoke in riddles of the blending tree how we both climbed it to the middle limbs and then pressed around to find our minds where they joined into a circle of warm understanding was a kiss of lover mouths surprised at how the flavors seamed and then you saw my eyes above the passion but wanted inside them to feel my dreams you said you knew you were in them usually nude with wanting arms and hands and you knew of the water sounds too that I brought to your wound in mornings and how you reached into them sometimes to find the man of me already there waiting to take you deeper into the you that was walking with the wind within me when your voice made swallow sounds in whispers _____________ daark |
||
| © Copyright 2011 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
surprised at how the flavors seamed and then you saw my eyes above the passion but wanted inside them to feel my dreams ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sweet dreams are made of this!! Lovely how the wind dances, creating that circle of warm. Yea that!! You look good in the dark yanno!! |
||
|
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
I agree with Blues! Wonderful stuff! Kat >^..^< |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Swallows are lovely, quick moving birds on winds that whisper under their wings... and October is always a giving month with the sound of Swallows. You've reminded me of a poem of a castle on a hill... I shall have to look for it... it has sounds such like this. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-07-2011 08:48 AM).] |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue, thank you lady ..you look great in the light _______________ ms kat, you bless me with your touch ms __________________ sweetsun, thank you special lady, you make me smile |
||
|
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
"and how you reached into them sometimes to find the man of me already there waiting to take you deeper into the you that was walking with the wind within me" Very deep and touching, and very romantic as well....you help my mind to travel places it rarely does anymore....thanx!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king...it is a pleasure to take you there thank you ms |
||
|
ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed the whisper sounds Mr. D ms. e |
||
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E,,,thank you sweet friend |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
