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I Don't Care
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I Don't Care |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I don’t care I don’t. I never did. I don’t care. I won’t. Never will. …I do care. I do. I always did. I do care. I will. I always will. I care too much Let me feel not. Oblivion, Sweet nothingness… Where are you? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Classic internal battle of will here, and done cleverly. I was writing the above and stopped for a second to get my thoughts straight before going on and saw your critique instructions. It is your poem, you can demand anything you want from whomever comes here, but the comments and critiques are the property of those who comment and critique. At any rate I stopped going on because something in me was deflated after reading your "instructions." ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Understood. It's more of a request than a demand. I appreciate the "good writes" but if I have to improve my methods, I need a little more. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are right, pen&paper, I apologize for being so preachy. ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
It's alright. I didn't realize that my request might have sounded like a demand. I may think about rephrasing it. Thank you. |
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