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flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-10-06 12:50 PM


home alone--
the adult bookstore
under his bed

*boys will be boys!  

Lottery Winner!
family reunion
the largest ever!

* geez, where did all these long lost relatives come from? And I wonder why?

MIRACLE CANCER CURE!
THE DISCLAIMER IN

small print

*always read the small print!

hippie flower child
walking Rodeo Drive
in gucci sandals

*must have a rich daddy?

highest-powered telescope:
he points to the horizon
but sees himself!

*Einstein was right..Space IS curved!  

--Al



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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
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1 posted 2011-10-06 02:16 PM


rofl...  Now this got more than a smile out of me.  Loved the bit on the gucci sandals... how easy it would be to live on nature alone, with an endless bank account behind you.     Thanks for brightening my morning.
Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2011-10-06 04:10 PM


These are always delightful. I enjoy the way your mind twists and tinkers with these little bites of truth.
Lori

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2011-10-06 07:53 PM


Very good Sir!  Thank for the chuckles,  love the contradictions and foot notes.

Cool!  

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2011-10-06 08:35 PM


LOL, cool stuff, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

flash
Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
5 posted 2011-10-07 07:29 AM


Hello and thank you ALL for your generous comments! Glad they brought a few chuckles and giggles. Laughter is the best medicine!

Al

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
6 posted 2011-10-07 01:46 PM



I was just in need of a smile, thank you! These are well thought out, dear Al.

M



flash
Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
7 posted 2011-10-07 04:13 PM


Margherita: Glad I was able to cheer you up!
Thanks for the generous comment.

Al

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
8 posted 2011-10-07 05:18 PM


"highest-powered telescope:
he points to the horizon
but sees himself!

*Einstein was right..Space IS curved!"

Nice one my friend!

JL

  

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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