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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2011-10-02 12:11 PM




Heard some freakers talking ‘bout The Movement,
talking like it was a thing alive
saying, "What's The Movement up to lately?"
doin' up the current Movement jive,

hoping there's a camera in the shadows
recording all their antiquated prose,
not caring if it's truth they shovel daily
only if their public's rating grows.

Any blemish real or just imagined
is focus for their spotlight's daily rage,
truth is less important than the talk shows
and a two inch column on their morning page;

as they speak the smoke around them thickens,
as facts become mirrored shades of lies,
all they require is our worshipful  acceptance,
they seem to think they are gods in disguise.

So, just keep those contributions flowing daily,
seems to be the only message they can drive,
the world may go to hell in their new basket
but Movements die when they become alive.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-02 02:18 PM


I'm sick to death of the friggin' movement, and the hope and change as well.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2011-10-02 02:24 PM


"... as facts... become lies... all they require is our worshipful acceptance..."
So true are your words, Icebox, well done,
ms. e

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-10-07 05:02 PM


Any blemish real or just imagined
is focus for their spotlight's daily rage,
truth is less important than the talk shows
and a two inch column on their morning page;

Excellent write, and to the point I think many would hold true!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
4 posted 2011-10-07 07:01 PM


Their movement gives me a movement! Nicely said, Ice.
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
5 posted 2011-10-07 08:50 PM


How did America get from Animal House to Animal Farm? I read this poem and for some reason recall a mental picture of Phil Donahue on TV yelling at some poor honest person with pseudo-livid rage...

The mass media largely sucks now. Hooray for the Internet, what can I say?

Good write.

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