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easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2011-09-28 01:04 AM

I sense the abyss,
and around you angels cry.
Are these not dream words?

Alone we walk together,
aware, prepared, friends for now.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2011-09-28 01:48 AM

Gave me an idea - thanks.
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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-09-28 02:38 AM

Such pain, temporary comfort, impending ending and acceptance so eloquently expressed and in so few words. Wow, Easy1!

Owl

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2011-09-28 08:05 PM

Oh this sounds like quiet dread, to me. This has such a weight to it...

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

4 posted 2011-09-28 11:48 PM

Well written and heavy with meaning.

Best,
Amaryllis

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

5 posted 2011-09-29 09:54 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments.

I drew this in a kindness before the inevitable judgement sort of way, such as a fierce unrequited romance between soulful crusaders.
Now though, in retrospect, I can perceive the "nuclear Armageddon" aspect hinted at. Hopefully peace is the order.

From the diffused light of December blinks on a Tannenbaum. Shazam!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-09-30 07:19 AM

This makes one stop and ponder, dear Easy1.

Very well done.

Now off to read Krawdad's inspiration.

Love,
M

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

7 posted 2011-09-30 02:30 PM

I have been both of these......I have had a 'friend for now' keep me from the abyss, and I have reached out to help others......what a two sided poem you have written! or is it just the way I read it...

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2011-09-30 04:22 PM

Sometimes you just know things aren't what they seem, and change is sensed long before it arrives. You capture this well.

Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2011-09-30 05:35 PM

"Alone we walk together,
aware, prepared, friends for now."

Very nice write, and insight.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2011-09-30 09:57 PM

"...around you angels cry."

Perfect.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

11 posted 2011-09-30 10:52 PM

I see resolution here, with company one can enjoy, without commitment...

cool,

j.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2011-10-06 07:17 PM

Nice...James

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

13 posted 2011-10-07 09:00 PM

Thanks for your comments.
There is a bale of hay here,
inside this wire... Hey!

From the diffused light of December blinks on a Tannenbaum. Shazam!

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