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Open Poetry #47

Dead Sober

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-10-01 10:38 PM

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Death
Threatened me
From below

I leapt on it
From on high

Morning
Found me
On the floor

Finding courage
Had not died

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-02-2011 02:15 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-01 10:41 PM

lying in a pool
of never-die
bad luck death

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-10-02 02:17 AM

Tantalisingly symbolic, ambiguous, enigmatic, reassuring and as effective as always from your minimalistic paintbrush, John.

Owl

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2011-10-02 09:46 AM

Read and absorbed as always,
M

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

4 posted 2011-10-02 10:04 AM

Victorious ending..death having no dominion as DT once uttered as he raged when the lights grew dim

Al

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-10-02 03:01 PM

Yes, courage is what is needed, Huan.
Enjoyed,
ms. e

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