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Understanding
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Understanding |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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Understanding In stolid retribution, hate, Often as not mistook for fate, Lingers long on the peering eyes That rip to shreds this grim disguise. That I could stand amongst you all, My only wish, in lieu the fall Of everything I once believed – If only by myself, deceived. By destiny stood I, before her… By God, how could I help adore her? By the very sorrow-tinged skies Under which live her haunting cries… Forever, I now limp the land, Reprisal’s bane, borne as a brand. Bearing in mark the crimson stain Upon a heart that loves in vain… But harrows every long lost deed, To lay to rest – as I still bleed – A timeless moment, past all warning, I walk endlessly in mourning. My only wish – my only curse… (The soul, long dead, living in verse)… To sing, by every feral moan Of what I must carry – alone! And if by silence I am met… I will sing louder – louder yet! Till every ear leads one to cringe – Till all is stripped finally from fringe… As, in the ashes, windswept – whining, Comes to life that silver lining… Understanding, upon the eye Before which, in peace, I shall die. Michael Anderson But dreams — of those who dream as I, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I first copied one verse and then another... With every read, my focus changes but one truth remains... This is compelling, poignant, powerful perfection. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I don't have anything wonderfully profound to say, Michael. I'm sure everyone will be able to grace you with the replies you deserve, I'm just at lack for words. All I can say, really, is that this one actually moved me to tears. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your words of late, touch me in many ways~~~ M |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Michael, Your poem gripped my heart, squeezed it hard, then threw it into the wind, I want it back! ms. e |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ruth, that’s quite a compliment. Thank you. Nicole, it would be hard for me to imagine someone’s words being more appropriate than knowing I actually moved you to tears… That a person “feel” what you are writing is the very need that drives the poet. I am honored that you felt this one. M, I am glad you’re enjoying them. Ms e., The wind blew off with mine ages ago… at least they have each other’s company now.  Michael |
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