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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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why is so had to feel anything anymore? needing to feel something anything more than nothing once so easily broken and broken so easily finding comfort in the pain then when the pain becomes comfort sorting through the shards that make up the pieces of me and you etched out of place like a journey of mosey mosaic parts torn from me and replaced with you soon the glue will begin to erode and the pieces of you will shatter and the masterpiece of me underneath can once and forever be free so that I can finally feel something~~~anything~~~more....... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
like a journey of mosey mosaic parts torn from me and replaced with you soon the glue will begin to erode and the pieces of you will shatter and the masterpiece of me underneath can once and forever be free The melancholy of this really touched me... the description of finding yourself again is just wonderful! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Realizing it's you that has to set you free is something that eludes many people throughout life. Your reemergence will be magical me thinks. Michael |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Suthern, yes it can be wonderful and scary soemtimes even... Michael, Me hopes so!! Magically Charmed!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A touching self-realization wonderfully expressed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
JL, Thanks for stopping by to read!!! |
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