Open Poetry #47 |
brim of window dawn |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you would speak to my eyes sometimes placing your voice on the wind there to cover the distance between thoughts and decorating my armor with your scent you were sigh legged, and so lovely at brim when you were the dawn at my window morns watching what I did to make those moan songs and how I strummed the woman belly gentle and then you tilted your chin to sun side removing shadows from any hidden dream and said I could not make you into storms you double dog dared me then waited still you spoke to my eyes for some time then placing your voice on my ear to listen and cover the distance between our thoughts decorating where my armor had been with damp you were sigh legged, and so lovely at brim _______________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Being in past tense, the magic of this contains a touch of melancholy ... thus whisper my ears Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love it . . . Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend ___________ lady Owl..thank you ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and then you tilted your chin to sun side removing shadows from any hidden dream and said I could not make you into storms ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You put a nice tint on those windows of yours, and I absolutely love the panorama. Hugs, you~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue,,,there is a park in Westlake I ride to sometimes and watch the gardener woman toy with leaves....the sun is always playful how it leans over my lap and pretends no one sees. thanks babe |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"you were..." isn't it, still is? enjoyed, ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, occasional and mostly yes, thanks ms |
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