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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-09-30 06:43 AM

you would speak to my eyes sometimes
placing your voice on the wind there
to cover the distance between thoughts
and decorating my armor with your scent

you were sigh legged, and so lovely at brim
when you were the dawn at my window morns
watching what I did to make those moan songs
and how I strummed the woman belly gentle

and then you tilted your chin to sun side
removing shadows from any hidden dream
and said I could not make you into storms
you double dog dared me then waited still

you spoke to my eyes for some time then
placing your voice on my ear to listen
and cover the distance between our thoughts
decorating where my armor had been with damp

you were sigh legged, and so lovely at brim

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-30 06:51 AM

Being in past tense, the magic of this contains a touch of melancholy ... thus whisper my ears

Love,
Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2011-09-30 07:12 AM

Love it . . .

Owl

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-09-30 08:58 AM

ms mar, thank you lady friend

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lady Owl..thank you ms

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-09-30 10:51 AM

and then you tilted your chin to sun side
removing shadows from any hidden dream
and said I could not make you into storms

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You put a nice tint on those windows of yours, and I absolutely love the panorama.

Hugs, you~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-09-30 11:17 AM

babyblue,,,there is a park in Westlake I ride to sometimes and watch the gardener woman toy with leaves....the sun is always playful how it leans over my lap and pretends no one sees. thanks babe

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-10-01 12:49 PM

"you were..." isn't it, still is? enjoyed, ms. e

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-10-01 06:04 AM

Ms E, occasional and mostly yes, thanks ms

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