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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-09-29 07:58 AM

When words are said and love does leave,
No matter the cost it does deceive.
Love, then, has fallen upon hard times,
You are left to yourself and your rhymes.
Is it true most men understand this?
In time all will crumble; this love's bliss.
And while the woman will wail and moan,
They really can't believe love has flown.
Our genders give each our marching orders,
In divorce court bring your tape recorder.

©September 26, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-09-29 08:04 AM

That was right to the cold hard point. Good one my friend!
Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-09-29 08:09 AM

Morning Lori. I'm still thinking about that Corvette.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-09-29 08:10 AM

Yeah, me too

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-29 08:12 AM

I'll bet.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2011-09-29 01:25 PM

Alright, after hearing all week how I should smile more... and not living up to it very well, this one got a downright good chuckle out of me. I'm with you 100% on the sardonics. Indeed, all will crumble.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-09-29 01:39 PM

Hah! Happy to be of assistance, Michael, in causing a chuckle to spew forth from you. Thank you for reading and commenting.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2011-09-30 10:15 PM

LOL... I wasn't expecting the ending... but it's perfect!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2011-09-30 10:18 PM

Happy you got a chuckle or two out of this little ditty, suthern.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2011-09-30 10:24 PM

Love it!!! And you'll still be screwed....

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

10 posted 2011-09-30 10:42 PM

Yeah, that's the way it usually happens, jwesley, more often than not. Thanks for checking in.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

11 posted 2011-10-01 12:36 PM

Sorry about it being over, good ending though, ms. e

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

12 posted 2011-10-01 07:50 AM

Thanks, ms. e. Life goes on.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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