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residue of dawn song
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residue of dawn song |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is oft I wonder then, velvet of dawn when you are long limbed along the sea with only your cape of mist to adorn those charms you call the tree of beckon when you wear that residue of your loving and the desire that remains nearly touched but still blending with a whisperers sounds like they were the panting of wolves within when you walk the edges of dark and of day and find my shimmer stone pressing your path phallic shaped to seduce your impaling but subtle like a sigh at your seam of soul do you bring your breasts to become tarnished to be simmered within the amber of my gaze and leave behind that extra spent you spend to find fill for your coveting of moan songs and to heal open the wounds of our addictions ____________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-27-2011 11:29 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Well now aren't you something! Lovely what you do with the mist, like a veil that leaves just enough to the imagination. Love the sheer beauty, dark dude~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue, thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
but subtle like a sigh at your seam of soul And herein lies the charm of your poetic visions which dare to reveal the true nature of all acts of creation. Here you touch heights of tantric awareness, that are mostly inaccessible in our western world. Inevitably the colors of different cultures mix upon the canvas of our perceptions. This work is an enthralling example of how the blending can be deeply enriching. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady with special eyes |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Oh my, isn't this a lovely read first thing in the morning. You make words dance...very nice. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole, thank you lady |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Those charms you call the tree of beckon, Lucky Charms? Enjoyed your poem Dark, ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, thank you for the eyes ms |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
With this, I am off to bed to dream of dawn. G'nite, Daark one. Thank you for all you share. Ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, I will tell her you were dreaming of her...she might put moves on ya though... thanks babe |
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