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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-09-27 10:52 AM


it is oft I wonder then, velvet of dawn
when you are long limbed along the sea
with only your cape of mist to adorn
those charms you call the tree of beckon

when you wear that residue of your loving
and the desire that remains nearly touched
but still blending with a whisperers sounds
like they were the panting of wolves within

when you walk the edges of dark and of day
and find my shimmer stone pressing your path
phallic shaped to seduce your impaling
but subtle like a sigh at your seam of soul

do you bring your breasts to become tarnished
to be simmered within the amber of my gaze
and leave behind that extra spent you spend
to find fill for your coveting of moan songs

and to heal open the wounds of our addictions


____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (09-27-2011 11:29 AM).]

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2011-09-27 06:48 PM


Well now aren't you something!  Lovely what you do with the mist, like a veil that leaves just enough to the imagination.

Love the sheer beauty, dark dude~


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-09-27 06:56 PM


Babyblue, thanks babe


Margherita
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3 posted 2011-09-29 05:26 AM


but subtle like a sigh at your seam of soul


And herein lies the charm of your poetic visions which dare to reveal the true nature of all acts of creation.

Here you touch heights of tantric awareness, that are mostly inaccessible in our western world. Inevitably the colors of different cultures mix upon the canvas of our perceptions. This work is an enthralling example of how the blending can be deeply enriching.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-09-29 06:43 AM


ms mar, thank you lady with special eyes
Nicole
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5 posted 2011-09-29 06:50 AM


Oh my, isn't this a lovely read first thing in the morning. You make words dance...very nice.  
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2011-09-29 07:05 AM


Ms Nicole, thank you lady
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7 posted 2011-09-29 10:25 AM


Those charms you call the tree of beckon,
Lucky Charms?  Enjoyed your poem Dark, ms. e

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-09-29 10:29 AM


Ms E, thank you for the eyes ms

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9 posted 2011-09-30 01:33 AM


With this, I am off to bed to dream of dawn.  G'nite, Daark one.  Thank you for all you share.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2011-09-30 06:33 AM


ms ali-san, I will tell her you were dreaming of her...she might put moves on ya though...   thanks babe
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