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Open Poetry #47

senryu for yu..oops I mean YOU

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-24 07:26 AM

host of fireflies
outside Motel 6 --
we'll leave the light on

websurfing--
a spider crawls on my screen
my mouse scares it away!

foot fetish--
years of practicing yoga
on my head

busy crosswalk---
the first to step out:
a seeing-eye dog

--Al

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2011-09-24 07:32 AM

Giggles, Al. Poor little spider. I hope he wasn't too frightened and that the seeing-eye dog got across safely (and his human).

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-24 08:47 AM

Enjoyed each one of these, dear Al.

Such cute associations!

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

3 posted 2011-09-28 04:36 AM

Owl, Margherita: Glad you enjoyed! Owl: yes, the spider and the dog made it across!

Al

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

4 posted 2011-09-28 06:36 AM

websurfing--
a spider crawls on my screen
my mouse scares it away!

Very clevah

Gave me a grin - that's the only time I tolerate spiders.

I enjoyed these very much

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2011-09-28 03:33 PM

Always a treat to read you! You are sooo much fun!
Lori

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

6 posted 2011-09-28 05:33 PM

Nicole, Lori: Glad I brought some chuckles.
Laughter the best medicine! Thanks for your generous comments!

Al

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

7 posted 2011-09-28 08:41 PM

LOL! Very clever, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

8 posted 2011-09-28 09:22 PM

Enjoying your humor in these.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

9 posted 2011-09-28 11:37 PM

All fun, these..but the first is my favorite!

Best,
Amaryllis

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

10 posted 2011-09-30 05:33 AM

Hello Kat, Kradad, Amaryllis:

I'm pleased that these made you giggle and smile!
Laughter the best medicine

Al

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