Open Poetry #47 |
Jen Kissed Me |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Jen kissed me. It was a surprise when Jen kissed me. She slipped her tongue into my mouth. Oh my, what was she thinking. Jen kissed me. She made me wild with lust. Then Jen went away. What to do? How to continue life as it was? Jen kissed me. After I talked to Jen about her kissing me, She said, Oh, if I'd only met you when you were younger . . . Jen kissed me. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-30-2011 11:12 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
And here I thought you were the kind of guy that wouldn't kiss and tell (wink) Too bad about the "if only" part. Bet you are still smiling anyway Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry Lori, I guess I shouldn't have told. Thank you for your comments. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm glad you did-- it made for a great write. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, I bet that such a surprise kiss was totally overwhelming, dear Jerry. The young temptress rewinded the clock backwards and made you feel young. And isn't that a very special gift! You conveyed your emotions very powerfully! Love, Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry I wish you would have left it as it was. PUT IT BACK! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Frustrating, a poem recalled. Dang, missed again! |
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