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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-09-30 07:06 AM


Jen kissed me.
It was a surprise when Jen kissed me.
She slipped her tongue into my mouth.
Oh my, what was she thinking.
Jen kissed me.
She made me wild with lust.
Then Jen went away.
What to do?
How to continue life as it was?
Jen kissed me.
After I talked to Jen about her kissing me,
She said,
Oh, if I'd only met you when you were younger . . .
Jen kissed me.




~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~


[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-30-2011 11:12 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-09-30 08:25 AM


And here I thought you were the kind of guy that wouldn't kiss and tell (wink) Too bad about the "if only" part. Bet you are still smiling anyway
Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-09-30 08:33 AM


Sorry Lori, I guess I shouldn't have told. Thank you for your comments.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-09-30 08:55 AM


I'm glad you did-- it made for a great write.
Margherita
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4 posted 2011-09-30 09:03 AM


Yes, I bet that such a surprise kiss was totally overwhelming, dear Jerry.

The young temptress rewinded the clock backwards and made you feel young. And isn't that a very special gift!

You conveyed your emotions very powerfully!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-09-30 10:10 AM


Jerry I wish you would have left it as it was. PUT IT BACK!
Krawdad
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6 posted 2011-09-30 10:48 AM


Frustrating,
a poem recalled.
Dang, missed again!

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