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The Clear, Full Moon
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The Clear, Full Moon |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA 
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Written August 3, 2007 Look at the light Shining over the water From the clear, full moon The way it caresses The crashing waves Of the ocean The way it gives The boats at sea Light to travel by And how it lights The beach For lovers to walk on Hand in hand Under The clear, full moon When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
wow...this is wonderful...love the imagery and romantic tone...i love it!  Faith There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Thank you faith. It was written for love birds. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Well, it may have been written for loved birds, but this old widowed guy thought it was pretty nice too. Of course, there were times I was part of a love bird situation. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this write is as perfect example of how poetry paints such beautiful images on the canvasses of the reader's mind...so well done |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Thank you Jerry and steavenr for your comments. I am glad you like it and it brought back memories. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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