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Open Poetry #47

Firefly

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2011-09-26 06:35 PM

Firefly darts
Making moonbeams
In the ink black of night

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-09-26 06:48 PM

nice one Jerry!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-09-26 06:58 PM

Tanks, Lori, tanks a lot.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-09-26 07:32 PM

Eyes behold beauty
through wide open heart windows
darkness reveals light

So very beautiful and inspiring, dear Jerry!
To see what you have seen and to write about it so creatively means that your heart was at peace and thus receptive.

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-26 07:50 PM

Appreciate the senryu, Margherita, and your kind words.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

5 posted 2011-09-26 09:04 PM

What a delicate dance, enjoyed

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2011-09-26 09:09 PM

Appreciate it, Nicole, you are sweet.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2011-09-27 02:09 AM

Love it!
Ida

shelerellaSP
Junior Member

since 2011-08-12

Posts 42

8 posted 2011-09-27 02:54 AM

10 words to invoke one of my favorite feelings! Wow. My heart just flutters watching fireflies, and you made my heart flutter with your 10 beautiful words!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2011-09-27 08:17 AM

Appreciate it, Ida . . .

Glad you liked my little haiku, shelerellaSP.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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