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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2011-01-21 11:17 AM

The brothers fought
for control of planet earth.
Did one become the great deity
worshipped by the people he despised
while the other was vilified
and became the personification of evil
to those he had defended?
Prometheus?
Bringer of light
and the gift of fire.
Inaccurate information?
Hidden truths?
Will the tree of knowledge
eventually bear fruit?

Ida Werrett

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2011-01-21 11:22 AM

Way cool Ida. I like the way you make me think. I like the way you stirred the pot of mythology and Bible.
Lori

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-01-21 11:34 AM

a very smooth and thought-provoking poem, Ida...i love it!

Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2011-01-21 12:28 PM

Ah, there is enough in this short, but inquisitive poem to give Dan Brown ideas. Nice work.

~ Life is sexually transmitted ~

The_Doctors_Angel_32
Member

since 2011-01-14

Posts 337
Florida, USA

4 posted 2011-01-21 12:56 PM

Awesome poem. I love poems that makes one think.

When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2011-01-21 01:36 PM

if I may...to answer your question with a question, "Will mankind be smart enough to recognize knowledge as knowledge should it ever occur?" mesmerizing admixture of creeds...very cool

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

6 posted 2011-01-23 12:31 PM

Killer. Just enough to rev the imagination.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2011-01-23 03:51 PM

excellent ending question indeed!

(and, will the human race prove to have
been that so-called 'noble experiment?!)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2011-01-23 07:28 PM

Thank you all for your kind remarks.
Ida

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