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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-09-23 11:29 AM


Call at your doorway, your aunt's here to visit
you hope that she doesn't stay long
A girl who has Krohns, your next door neighbor
strolls slowly by humming a song

Hey, it could happen, don't think the Beatles
just made up that whole silly verse
True inspiration of minds on vacation
have come up with something much worse

Maybe you've heard it, don't make me tell you
this one is so bad I could cry
Somebody calls you, your aunt's here. Quite slowly,
the girl with colitis goes by


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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-09-23 11:38 AM


You finally did it...shot one over my head, I don't get it. I know I'll kick myself when I do.
Lori

katahdin
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2 posted 2011-09-23 12:33 PM


The girl with KALEIDOSCOPE EYES! Lol!
Kat >^..^<

JL
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3 posted 2011-09-23 12:48 PM


Oh, no. #1
This is not even a diamond in the rough.
I think Lucy Vodden is rolling over in her grave.



Great song...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2011-09-23 01:49 PM


Lori,
Lol, but you must have heard "Loose he's in disguise with dye, mons "
Doc

Kat,
Lol, thanks I can see you were a fellow Beatles fan.

JL,
Aw,c'mon, like I've got any control over where my mind takes me. lol.
Doc

OwlSA
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5 posted 2011-09-23 02:45 PM


Dr Moose, this was the one I didn't get and unfortunately I saw what Kat said before I could work it out.  This is chortleworth!

Owl

Dr.Moose1
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6 posted 2011-09-23 02:50 PM


Owl,
Thank you. See JL, Owl thought it was a "gem", ouch, lol.
Doc

suthern
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7 posted 2011-09-23 03:05 PM


LOL... I know they're going to put you back on your meds soon... until then, I'll just enjoy! LOL
OwlSA
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8 posted 2011-09-23 03:09 PM


Giggles (and chortles) Dr Moose at your reply (I will never call you Doc - I couldn't bear to leave out the Moose).

Owl

Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2011-09-23 04:40 PM


suthern,
Thanks, lol, I ain't been on them kinda meds since the seventies, must be havin' a flashback.
Doc

Owl,
Thank you dear gal, it does have a certain ring to it I believe, lol.
Doc

Balladeer
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10 posted 2011-09-24 12:18 PM


Doc wanted to be in the service.
He wanted to be a Marine
But the general said
Be a  swabbie instead
You're the worst soldier I've ever seen!!

A wannabe buddy was also
Told he wouldn't be wearing the green.
So they left, arm and arm,
Heading back to their farm
Poor Doc Moose and his fellow sub-marine.

JL
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11 posted 2011-09-24 08:15 AM


#1  I think Balladeer is catching the fever.

(((Dr.Moose1 Fever!!)))


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Dr.Moose1
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12 posted 2011-09-26 05:00 PM


Balladeer,
Dang man, now you're going to have me humming that all day, lol.
Doc

JL,
Lol, yeah he's got the "fever" alright, too bad it's "Saturday Night". I don't think the poor fellow ever got over raffling off that disco tent.
Doc

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