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The Proper Way to Say Goodbye
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The Proper Way to Say Goodbye |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
To the one who still moves in me: Domo Arigato Gozaimasu, ai shi te ru wa You were speaking in the wind and I, to our moon on currents leading to the heart we knew we'd meet up soon Oh, what a glorious day that was your voice deep in my eyes I tasted, sipped, devoured your thoughts, but never satisfied I watched you partake of the sounds I made upon my tongue melodies written for the soul and from my own was sung So delicate yet so profound I never heard you leave there were days I would have cried but this time I believe Our souls met just long enough to hold on for a spell remember how "we" blessed our lives and wish each other well... ~Sunkissed. ps, For some reason, this poem posted in insights when I picked this particular forum. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I think those dedicated to art would thank you. Excellent write. Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Lovely, Sunkissed. There are some who could learn well from you. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
remember how "we" blessed our lives Thank you for this... I can't tell you how much I needed it or what it means to me... but your words found a home in my heart. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Splendid! Lingering for a while in this beauty ... M ( I guess the reason for this being sent to insights is to attribute to the little "bad" word that the control system formed of two separate words of those following the name ...) |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
How sweet and true this poem is amazing. Be blessed and well just like your poem.  |
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Aaron Snyder New Member
since 2011-09-02
Posts 6Dependent on my state of mind. |
Very beautiful poem. What a placid feeling reading it has given me. Made cheerful by genial jest. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Our souls met just long enough to hold on for a spell remember how "we" blessed our lives and wish each other well... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh I just love your thoughts here....This speaks to me in the very best way. Lovely, absolutely lovely! It's so great to read you here again, sunkissed one~ |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Thanks everyone! You've definitely warmed my heart with your thoughts here. ~Sunkissed. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is sensational, leaves me breathless - thanks so much for an enjoyable read Love is the life of the soul... |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Our souls met just long enough to hold on for a spell" I love your thinking.I so agree that whatever gift of word or smile we are given by another, it does not matter how long the meeting lasts on the outside.It is the love cast into the heart and the memories that last that counts. Thank you for this message.jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A small boost upward because of the special lesson learned here. jo |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
sigh......so well expressed, for trully there are those, that are only for a while, even though we would hold on to them forever...you dealt with this well, the writing bleeds peace |
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