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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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mercury pool of meditation melted coins congealed to liquid like mirrors that fell from morning into pools where laughter made no sound she in her woolen weave of fog then the dawn steps down in high heel toes long the lithe of her light step limbs to disturb thought that was of evening swirling her amber lips to whisper leaving that residue on glass smooth where she writes her poetry by finger and warms it to invisible layers of nothing just a moment she says before she is tomorrow ___________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tip toe pen is magical, absolutely gorgeous! Stunning imagery and enticing thoughts in every line. Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you sweet little lady friend |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Truly enjoyed, my friend. Very well written. j. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
the dawn steps down in high heel toes long the lithe of her light step limbs to disturb thought that was of evening Your pen may walk softly, but it leaves swirls of magic. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Jwes thanks amigo _______________ Ms Suthern, thanks lady for the en chantment you return. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
still as smooth as honey My spirit will rise |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I never get tired of reading your poetry. Quiet magical indeed. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms G, thanks lady friend _____ Ken, thank you sir |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
she in her woolen weave of fog then the dawn steps down in high heel toes the woven fog of wool would make her a sheep yeah? grazing on forbidden ground hence the fog....or is it a wolf in sheeps clothing in high heeled toes?  I REALLY like this one....  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms angel...it is just the marine layer here at the coast and how the dawn seems to wear it like something Victoria Secret..thanks lady |
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