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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-09-20 07:50 AM



mercury pool of meditation
melted coins congealed to liquid
like mirrors that fell from morning
into pools where laughter made no sound

she in her woolen weave of fog then
the dawn steps down in high heel toes
long the lithe of her light step limbs
to disturb thought that was of evening

swirling her amber lips to whisper
leaving that residue on glass smooth
where she writes her poetry by finger
and warms it to invisible layers of nothing

just a moment she says before she is tomorrow

___________

daark

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-20 08:03 AM


Tip toe pen is magical, absolutely gorgeous!

Stunning imagery and enticing thoughts in every line.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-09-20 08:04 AM


ms mar, thank you sweet little lady friend


jwesley
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3 posted 2011-09-20 10:01 AM


Truly enjoyed, my friend. Very well written.

j.

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4 posted 2011-09-20 10:57 AM


the dawn steps down in high heel toes
long the lithe of her light step limbs
to disturb thought that was of evening

Your pen may walk softly, but it leaves swirls of magic. *S*

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2011-09-20 11:23 AM


Jwes thanks amigo

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Ms Suthern, thanks lady for the en chantment you return.

MGROVES
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6 posted 2011-09-20 06:03 PM


still as smooth as honey

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

ken206573
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7 posted 2011-09-20 06:17 PM


I never get tired of reading your poetry. Quiet magical indeed.
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2011-09-20 06:23 PM


Ms G, thanks lady friend

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Ken, thank you sir

Angel4aKing
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9 posted 2011-09-22 02:03 AM


she in her woolen weave of fog then
the dawn steps down in high heel toes


the woven fog of wool would make her a sheep yeah? grazing on forbidden ground hence the fog....or is it a wolf in sheeps clothing in high heeled toes?

I REALLY like this one....


~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2011-09-22 06:31 AM


ms angel...it is just the marine layer here at the coast and how the dawn seems to wear it like something Victoria Secret..thanks lady
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