Open Poetry #47 |
Two For You By Request |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
* love's shattered shards slash unexpected memories old scars bleed anew * * feathered starfire bursts slicing night's cerulean blue life's impassioned flash * * * ©2011 by icebox |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Loved the first one and liked the second. I write senryu's, but hardly ever post them. ~~ I'd kill for a Nobel Peace Prize. ~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
If senryu was by another name, it might be icebox. Excellent write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
So glad they are in here in their own threads, Charly, so all can see them - and not just in replies. Thank you. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Awesome, Charley, like everything you write. Ida |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Strong dose of senryu with a bite! I write senryu but more humorous--yours are powerful! Thanks for sharing, Al |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
very thought provoking.....intense and hypnotic too actually .... makes me think of those times when u think u recognize someone from the past and don't know what to expect....afraid to show old scars....to go back.... "unexpected memories old scars bleed anew" Really liked this!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Excellent cadence... "life's impassioned flash" Awesome lines! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Stunningly intense, dear Charly! Love, Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I like the first one best, but both are excellent.. |
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