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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-09-15 11:51 AM


and now the dawn again in her long sleeve gown
touching nipples of mountains with her amber fingers
making them melt into but simple hills, hallowed
hollow until she returns on the morrow with warm

there are voices in her pockets like splendid strings
she tugs at them with violin glancing strum
and then smiles her lips to width of ocean
the soothing she says heals memory of wounds

I am but the distant wind touching trees between
turning leaves into butterflies of amber and bronze
so she might consider them as comfortable jewelry
and might model it at the waterfall of afternoon

when she bathes for those hours until the evening

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Daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2011-09-15 12:07 PM


You've painted a most lovely morning...
I miss my CA hills...




Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-09-15 12:41 PM


sweetsun, I am sure they miss you too...hurry back soon...and thank you lady for the eyes here.
Martie
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3 posted 2011-09-15 01:14 PM


DS...It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-09-15 02:00 PM


thank you lovely lady...you are a pleasure
flash
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5 posted 2011-09-15 05:24 PM


you're quite the romantic...woman love romance--a missing ingredient in todays cyber age-- morning rays start it off and the glow from the light on the mountain carries over into afternoon and spreads to evening.

A wonderful evocative poem!

flash

Margherita
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6 posted 2011-09-15 05:42 PM


I am but the distant wind touching trees between
turning leaves into butterflies of amber and bronze
so she might consider them as comfortable jewelry
and might model it at the waterfall of afternoon

when she bathes for those hours until the evening


Magical! Nature and your talent make for a spectacular piece of art.

Love,
Margherita

ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-09-15 09:51 PM


" I am but the distant wind touching..."
That phrase is what I would like my poetry to sound like to others, as yours does to us.
Ms. E

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
8 posted 2011-09-15 10:38 PM


Nicely done as always, enjoyed!
kat >^..^<

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2011-09-16 07:35 AM


ms mar, thank you lady friend

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ms E...your poems are just as they should be,,,,thanks babe

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ms Kat, thanks doll for the touch

Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2011-09-17 08:53 PM


How smooth the gold in this and the molt of wings.  
Angel4aKing
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11 posted 2011-09-17 09:17 PM


"there are voices in her pockets like splendid strings she tugs at them with violin glancing strum and then smiles her lips to width of ocean the soothing she says heals memory of wounds"

this one is healing to the soul....enjoyed this one...


~~~kingsangel~~~

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2011-09-18 06:41 AM


Ms Kl, thank you much ms


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Ms Angel, thank you for the bless skin.

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