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tomorrow colors on tiptoe
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tomorrow colors on tiptoe |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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whispers may be butterflies along sigh ways but you are bare foot dawn in long limb skin music is just heart beat rhythm violins the sun is dressed in his best yellow carnation and you in your amber and nipple colors first time meeting again, a thousand times the sky of night is still wrinkled indigo at the foot of the bed, like a sleeping child just shapes and slow movement comfortable you stand on tiptoes, painted toes of rainbows girl giggles of welcoming warm at window brim and you whisper of a secret you have hidden maybe tomorrow you will bring it without candy ____________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As so often every single line displays its own beauty to be absorbed in awe and the whole of it reflects your beautiful mind and makes me wonder about the vast bottomless pond of your inspiration. Tiptoeing out of the enchantment with a smile. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, your eyes are perfect on my pen...thank you lady friend |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Tomorrow has arrived, Enjoyed your poem,Dark. Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
With every line so beautiful, it's tough to pick a favorite part... but to not give special recognition to these would be just wrong... for they are magnificent. *S* you stand on tiptoes, painted toes of rainbows girl giggles of welcoming warm at window brim |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, thank you ms, yes it is time. _______________ Suthern lady, thank you for the tiptoes of your eyes. |
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