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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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I hope you didn't write What I said on your heart And I hope you understand That this is tearing me apart I hope you didn't hear As I shouted out in despair All of the things That I hope you never hear I hope you didn't listen As I screamed out in fear As I was trying not to listen to…. …..what was heard so very clear I hope you didn’t write What I said on your heart And I hope you understand That this is tearing me apart I hope you hear me one day tho…. As I say I still love you Tho I still haven’t a clue why… I hope you hear me one day And believe it when I say I wrote those words I love you On my heart and there they stay…. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Julie, this is quite beautiful, did read it already at 1am but was too tired to reply. Your captivating poetic ponderings reflect what happens often to many when we think there are obstacles to the full blooming of love, so we keep it within our heart, where we tend to it until maybe one day we open the little heart door again ... Enjoyed this very much. Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Angel4aKing: Very adoring write for someone in your past. Very nice. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Excellent write on a well-nigh universal theme. I can relate to this very much. Thanks! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you all for your replys and my apologies for taking so long to respond...glad you enjoyed!!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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