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Open Poetry #47

I Awoke to a Vision

byski
Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 235
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2011-09-15 02:19 PM

Filled with cosmic ocean dust
Trapped in a world with decaying rust
A light inside me shines so bold
The light is a gift as so I am told
I awoke to a vision this morn’ of your face
The light surrounds me, dancing in grace
If this vision could always stay
I would spend my time in such a way
To make you smile and laugh out loud
To make my life of one I am proud
To leave in my wake a legacy
To enjoy each moment, just you and me

Unorthodox maybe, but I grow on you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2011-09-15 07:05 PM

Nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-15 07:18 PM

Dear bysky, this is a very lovely vision and you rendered it skillfully.

Love,
Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-09-15 09:14 PM

Nice write byski.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2011-09-15 09:32 PM

Just lovely, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2011-09-15 09:46 PM

Very, very, cool, byski,
Ms. E

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2011-09-17 11:44 PM

I love this vision... especially the last line! *S*

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