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Margherita
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0 posted 2011-09-14 05:02 AM



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This day is God’s day:
we have the chance to be love
to soothe the world’s pain

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Somewhere someone hurts:
we can reach out with a hug
drops of love do heal

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Rivers of tears flow:
a small gesture of love helps
rebuild trust in life


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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-14 05:36 AM


This is kind of a reminder for myself. I just thought to share my thoughts, as I guess we all sometimes are too busy to reach out and yet if we can spare a few moments to show someone we care, it's important.

Love and enjoy your day!
Margherita

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2 posted 2011-09-14 06:01 AM


There are nuns, who are so adept, so loving that all they do is pray for others each day.

I consider you in such esteem.

thank you

I might sleep now.

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-09-14 06:11 AM


May your sleep be restoring and peaceful, dear Karen! Here it is noon, so in NO it must be almost dawn?

I send you my love and hugs. Thank YOU!

Yes those nuns send out energy of love to the world and it does make a difference!

Margherita

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4 posted 2011-09-14 07:18 AM


Wonderful sentiments! One of my favorite sayings by an Indian guru (his name eludes me):

"All the happiness in the world is caused by making others happy; all the misery in the world is the result of seeking pleasure for oneself"

enjoyed the read!

flash

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5 posted 2011-09-14 08:32 AM


The guru knows the truth, yes! Thank you so much, dear Al, for your loving comment.

Individuals:
primordial magnetism
calls for unity


M

JL
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6 posted 2011-09-14 08:52 AM


Did I say this is marvelous?
Well It is!!

Nice write Margherita!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-09-14 10:06 AM


I love all three, and happy you named them what they are, senryu, instead of haiku.

There is so much that can be accomplished within the 5-7-5 ratio and I love them.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

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8 posted 2011-09-14 04:11 PM


ah, this should be practiced by every one alive   wonderful
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9 posted 2011-09-14 11:07 PM


"... soothe... heal ... trust",
LOved all three, Ms. E

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10 posted 2011-09-16 06:18 AM


Thank you, my dear Poet friends, for your generous and loving comments!

I enjoyed your presence here.

Have a wonderful day.

Love,
Margherita

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11 posted 2011-09-17 10:22 PM


I read the first one and loved it so much I hesitated... though I knew the others wouldn't disappoint (and they didn't *S*). All 3 are absolutely beautiful... as is the heart that shares them with us! *S*
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12 posted 2011-09-18 05:40 AM


Thank you, dear Ruth, for your loving sensitive comment!

Have a wonderful Sunday all.
Margherita

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