Open Poetry #47 |
Easy Heart (A song for Kaye) |
JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Easy Heart (A song for Kaye) An easy heart can be so easily broken torn so easily in two a heart filled with eagerness for love so innocent trusting and true so easily shattered for love drawn to every word, glance, touch and desire. your easy heart went impatient for a chance to begin to blossom like a precious desert rose. embracing arms held you warm, comforting and close and in the back of your mind an end to cold desert nights and your easy heart hurriedly moved to love your heart’s passions so true reasons were right words between you were kind and seemed so real your easy heart gave everything to love your prayers seemingly answered from heaven above to your easy heart love is so easily given your easy heart could never know that in a short season it would be broken torn in pieces leaving your loving spirit silent and alone an easy heart can be easily broken in two so easily broken for love everything given nothing in return your easy heart gave away to love and it was gone in a season plans and dreams became a charade cutting your easy heart like a blade petal by petal your heart fell to the desert floor embracing cold nights and parched days a mirage of chameleon play your easy heart counting sins one by one and crying songs each night to heaven your living-love a regret but to an easy heart infinite love is impossible to forget after a season of rain and desert wind your easy heart came to change a beautifully glowing desert rose eager to share your forever love and blossom a new start when you find that someone special who will faithfully love your easy heart… * Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can hear the guitar of this in the background, where some chimes meet it in harmony... this is a lovely song, JL... and for me, personally, quite fitting at the moment, though it was written for another. You never do know where a poem might find itself, do you. Thank you ever so much for sharing this with all of us. P.S. Thank you for your note in "Living..." your comments are always very special. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I can so relate to an easy heart...you have captured it beautifully. This is delightful! Very much enjoyed. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
JL, this is a beautiful, sensitive, compassionate, poetic gift to Kaye, as only a beautiful, sensitive, compassionate, poetic soul can give. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is so much tenderness and delicacy in your words here, dear JL. I enjoyed your sensitiveness in this song very much. Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lori: I am so glad you can relate, and I think it’s a good thing to have an easy heart. ------- Owl: Kaye was very surprised. And now I am very surprised and happy that you enjoyed. ------- Margherita: Thank you for reading and your very kind words. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
That is the way of the desert rose, that comes after rain when the desert glows for perhaps a day, till it's roots wane in the parched sand agaom longing for rain. Easy heart token, easy come, easy go defies patient pefection in taking it slow. ... it's hard to be thirsty, indeed! Such sadness here. KL |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
JL, I am sure that Kaye was a lot more than surprised. I am sure she was warmed by your kind compassion, and motivated to see a new day in a different light. I am sure that your song/poem has made more difference in her life than you could imagine. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
plans and dreams became a charade cutting your easy heart like a blade petal by petal your heart fell to the desert floor embracing cold nights and parched days a mirage of chameleon play The melody of this song is understanding... and what a beautiful song it is!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Klassy Lassy: Kaye was pretty much hurt by what had happen to her but in time, she revealed, she would heal. When she offered her story to me it just broke my heart. She is such a sweet girl. ----------- OwlSA: Well I know she was a bit teary-eyed as she read it, but she was really happy that someone took the time to listen to her story then reflect in verse. ---------- Suthern: You made my day, sweet lady! Thank you. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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