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Open Poetry #47

Love Secret

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2011-09-09 09:13 AM

The level of pride in my blood is too high,
And shatters of passion are trapped in a shell,
I'm growing older, I cannot deny,
And something unique fills my heart's every cell.

Love sacred, love secret, love ably disguised
Is tormented, ever forbidden, but still
It speaks for itself, it is self-emphasized
At times when I quell it regardless my will.

The distance between us brings love only luck -
I'm close to you in my reverie land,
And when we do meet, I am totally struck
By "devil-may-care" and "just play-pretend".

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-09 09:30 AM

I'm of the opinion that we expect much too much out of this elusive and infuriating thing we call love. Too many times we allow our pride and prejudices and downright stubbornness to get in the way of love, sweet love.

I liked your poem very much.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-09-09 12:27 PM

"At times when I quell it regardless my will."

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2011-09-11 05:08 PM

Enjoyed your poem,
Ms. E

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