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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-09-09 06:37 AM

you said you wanted to look into my eyes
but you looked down there instead
and put your hands in my pockets
looking for some change you said

something that would fill you up inside
make your empty feel full too
and you knew I had the tools
to fix your broken box, or build it new

you wore your lady like in dresses there
sitting proper on the edge
but your skin whispered my name
or what you would call me more often

when you strummed my mind with thigh sighs
and put me in the positions you imagined
would be most suitable for study
while I looked up from what I was doing

and watched your soul through those glances

_____________

daark

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-09 09:33 AM

Wonderful, wonderful! After I read one of your outstanding (almost all of them in my way of thinking) I am left in a state of complete awe. You, sir, are the most original poet I have ever run across.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2011-09-09 09:41 AM

You do leave one thinking they have
peeked in on something exquisite,
with the thought that this could only
happen in fantasy.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2011-09-09 10:08 AM

JP, you are too kind Sir. I am humbled at your comment.

___

Sweetsun, I am amazed at how the trickles of wet seduce with their movement as the meander down the thighs of a mountain to the river splayed bed below. Thanks lady.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-09 03:10 PM

while I looked up from what I was doing

and watched your soul through those glances

You make me think of moments that shimmer and glances that change the path of a life... and memories that remind me what living's all about. *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2011-09-09 03:12 PM

ms suthern...(looking up from what I am doing now...and smiling....) thank you babe

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-09-10 06:28 AM

quote:
but your skin whispered my name
or what you would call me more often

Luscious, enticing, rich ... Every word a drop of transparent liquid pleasure.

Just awesome,yes.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2011-09-10 06:51 AM

ms mar, thanks to you special lady

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2011-09-11 05:16 PM

Do you really have the tools
to fix broken anew?
Enjoyed your poem, Dark.
Ms. E

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2011-09-11 09:11 PM

Ms E, if needed I will build a new one. Thanks ms

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