Open Poetry #47 |
Somerset |
Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
(Somerset was my Uncle’s horse ranch where I spent many a delightful summer during my youth. Upon his death the property was turned in condominiums.) ************** I recall and often with longing the days at Somerset long summer afternoons whiled away spent in the swing by the gazebo under the old oak tree the century-old branches providing shade someone in the garden whistling a happy tune horses shining and nibbling green grasses the contented buzz of the bees, the tang of lemonade the cats purring away the afternoon the dogs dozing contentedly knowing all was well from the kitchen sounds of dinnertime preparations the smell of homebaked bread and clothes fragrant with sun bouquets of sweet peas and snapdragons adorning rooms a book on my lap inspiring me even then with hopes of someday being able to tell of how those days imprinted themselves on me laughter and acceptance, love pouring freely from hearts so true always someone wanting to listen to vivid imaginings and when needed, provide a comforting word or hug falling asleep midst the silence only heard in the country in a somewhat dilapidated house its sheltering roof under constant repair nonetheless a castle to my young eyes safe and secure, loved and nourished in every way swathed in crisp white sheets, a prayer that it would always last still on my lips as I drifted off to the peace only to be found in a young girl's unknowing dreams from my first breath until I donned my Grandmother’s gown these are but a few of the many things the days spent at Somerset will forever mean to me. © Marcia MillerTwiford |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is a great write and story. Too bad about the loss, it's sad. "the century-old branches providing shade" JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
It's an bitter-sweet feeling to drive down the street that use to be a dirt road and see all those tall buildings where the ranch use to be. Thomas Wolfe said, "You can't go home again", but I sure wish I could. Marcia www.thewritingforum.net |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, OH, OH, OH, OH, Marcia! The memories you painted of this are soooooooooooo beautiful - and the loss has tears pouring down my cheeks. I am at a loss to tell you how much I lived and loved it all. Owl |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you my friend. I wish every young girl could have the advantage of "Somerset." |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, boy! Me too! Owl |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your words and poetical expertise give the reader a clear vision of what Somerset meant to you as a young girl, and even now as a woman looking back. Enjoyed . . . ~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you Jerry. It was very special. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've preserved it so beautifully in your memories... thank you for sharing it with us! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You offered us a wonderful "bouquet" of emotions lived at Somerset. A joy to read and experience together with you, dear Marcia. Wonderfully rendered memories. Love, Margherita |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Thank you for you kindness Margherita. I wish everyone could have such a childhood. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Like Wordsworth at Tintern, Marcia returns to word her memories..well done, but a sad story in ways..Codominiums do not belong on sacred ground. It reminds me of the farm I grew up on, now circled by those ugly things. I enjoyed your thoughs. |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
days of childhood--yes, those special memories never forgotten...very poignant and evocative hometown visit "no trespassing" signs where we used to play sad, enjoyed the read, --flash |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
A beautiful childhood, Somerset, Thank you for sharing it, Ms.E |
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