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Like Water Flowing Downstream
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Like Water Flowing Downstream |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like Water Flowing Downstream I tried so hard to please my lover, perhaps too hard. Oh I don't mean sensually, I mean caring for her and being concerned for her welfare, and now by necessity I change my strategy to not trying so hard, letting nature follow its natural course, like water flowing down stream. JamesLee 05September 2011 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, your inner beauty always comes through in your beautiful poems, just like in this one. Your sensitivity, your wisdom, offered in small poetic morsels, are delightful. Trying too hard indeed may have the opposite effect of the one we pursue. Beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Keen sense of reality.  Nice write JamesLee. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It's hard to find the balance between caring for someone new and being pushy... letting things flow naturally sounds like a good plan! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Margherita, JL and suthern for the wonderful responses...James |
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