Open Poetry #47 |
the numbers of love |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
two months, less a day when the “two shall be one” when the girl I give away to a soldier strong and brave will love her with a heart that shall never fade nor run because the love they have is a love that heaven gave spent on one another with a wealth that can’t be reckoned nor numbered in the thoughts of those who’ll try and fail for love that’s true can ne’er be measured nor ever is it second to dreams or wishes or worry’s sums that surely will assail a two who are one in spirit, soul, and all in imaginings, thoughts, and reveries molded and composed becoming individual the two yielding one |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Beautiful story of love and devotion. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
I could feel the love in these here words. Beautifully written. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Two individuals, becoming one. A lovely piece,I like the format, its similar to a medal I've seen. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
It all adds up to love. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great love presentation. Many classic lines. Love the format. Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
JerryP, Thank you for the kind remarks…they are greatly appreciated DocAngel, So glad this touched you deeply. Thank you very kindly. Trina, Not sure which medal you are referring to, but glad it jogged your memory…have to admit it was strictly unintentional katahdin, …yes, indeed…the sum of it all is definitely love…thank you for your kind remarks Eric, Thank you so much for the gracious remarks…it is greatly appreciated |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i love everything about this poem...it is a profound and very beautiful poem...i applaud you! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you, faithm...I wrote as a kind of countdown poem for my youngest daughter's upcoming wedding. I meant to write it exactly two months before, but time has a way of interfering with plans...thus "two months, less a day" ...just a little late |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a lovely wedding gift, Sreavenr. ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ohh, Ida...but, I can only wish (as father of the bride) that my wedding present could only be a poem... ...not |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
It still will be a cherished gift Steven... It is beautiful! Lori |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
thank you, Lori, that is a very sweet thing to say |
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