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Delicate Thing
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Delicate Thing |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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He is my trellis And I the vine A delicate thing At the mercy of the wind Dancing flaming petals incessantly And should I lose him My fate to befall The accursed earth A blooming briar Twisted in pain Beauty Overgrown With Grief (repost) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Very, very lovely, Lori. Owl |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thank you Owl. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Seems there is always something trying to tear things down. This was very nicely old, Lori. ~ Clones are people two ~ |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
This is very beautifully written. I loved the imagery. When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry I'm glad you found my old nicely. __________________________________________ The_Doctors_Angel_32 thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lori |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
ah, but the delicate things are often the most beautiful. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Trina! |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..>>simple and lyric..quite grand..>>spiros |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I adore your analogy and how lovely the vine weaves around your words. So pretty~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Love is a delicate flower. Beautiful! Kat >^..^< |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love those metaphors Lori If he should ever leave you then like a vine falling to the earth. Just wonderful stuff! Eric two maggots were fighting in dead earnest! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
lovely write...so exquisite and picturesque |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
i agree...this is simply beautiful...nice work as always! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Spiros Zafiris,Blues,katahdin- thank you so much for your kind remarks, I'm glad you liked it. ___________________________________________ Eric, Steven, & faith- Your words are much too kind. Thank you for supportiong my work. Lori |
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