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Runaway
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Runaway |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Let’s go crazy today and just runaway to some place hot and heavy where everyday doesn’t get in the way of our time and space to have our way with each other’s love displays Let’s get wild when we play Just take me away and have your way C’mon baby make my day |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Why not lets just runaway Out to some secluded bay We'll play in the sun and sand Listen to Sergent Pepper's Band We will take all the best When we leave we'll leave the rest Liked your sensuous poem so much I just couldn't help myself, Lori. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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The_Doctors_Angel_32 Member
since 2011-01-14
Posts 337Florida, USA |
Beautifully written. My mind went where it should not but I shook it off. Makes me wish I had a good man in my life and was married. LOL When the family is together, the soul is at peace - Russian Proverb |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry- glad to be an inspiration! I'll take that as a huge compliment! Thank you! Lori __________________________________________ The_Doctors_Angel_32-Glad you liked it and the spirit in which it was written Lori |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Everyone should eh...."runaway" every now and then  Enjoyed.-Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes Trina, I agree...but forget now and then I want to "get away" NOW! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, if you're going anytime soon, take me with you! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, Lori, I am ready, girl! It's time to go and have some fun! I have the palm trees and the beaches And we can frolic in the sun! The carnivals have their gates open Ferris wheel is good to go. Cotton candy on our noses Watch the clowns put on their show. Sometimes one has to cut the cables Head for where rules disappear, Let the hair down, smell the roses, Kick one's life in passing gear. Some go through life without much living Don't make memories when they could. Grab the ring and spin the wheel! Do what makes you feel good! If I were just four decades younger  I would answer your sweet call. Just go out and live life fully, Have fun and enjoy it all!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine- 3 is a crowd...sorry ___________________________________________ 'Deer-40 years younger?! What are ya, 90? You sure don't look it. Seriously, I'm very flattered by your poem. Lori |
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