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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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0 posted 2011-09-06 12:09 PM



The dark swallows me like a lover
covering my naked in black
Comfort comes in shadow hands
and dream whispered kisses
Setting me adrift
on a black pearl river

LGR©9/6/11
© Copyright 2011 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-09-06 01:41 PM

Short and to the point.
Nice one.



JL

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-09-06 04:14 PM

. . . and there ain't nothing like surfing on that black pearl river . . . Gotta love it . . .

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2011-09-06 04:40 PM

Look at you play with words...
lovely...
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