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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2011-09-04 07:02 AM

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Avid desire

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In the heat of afternoon
something blazes deep inside
followed by a vast inner tremor.
Soft invisible wings
cling to my heartbeats,
emotions expand
into ripples of alertness.

My very essence is on fire
flames whisper
of universal truths
to be captured in flight
right in that moment
out of space and time
by my boundless consciousness.

Every cell seems to respond
to the irresistible call
of passionate divine tunes
asking to be perceived
to be hummed
to be absorbed
to be shared.

I become the vessel
filling with the river
of sacred revelations.
You are me, I am you,
look into the mirror
and greet your soul
let it dance in your eyes,
reflect All there is,
dress your gaze
with the incomparable
fullness of pure beauty.

Be the crystal clear pond
reverberating star sighs.
Be the light, invite the shadows
to dance within the circle
of life’s manifestation
where all connections
are tied in Love.

Be ME, be LOVE!

Feel the tremor inside
follow your avid desire
to transcend all materiality,
discover unity.

Be ME, be LOVE!

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2011-09-04 08:07 AM

ms mar, I so enjoy your love songs....and sometimes I see some passion so vivid I wonder how you keep it within..

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-09-04 10:43 AM

Dear Margherita-This is really lovely. I can't pick a favorite line because there are too many to pick from. Great poem, dear lady!

Love-Faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Word Weaver
Member

since 2011-03-06

Posts 437
California, USA

3 posted 2011-09-04 01:29 PM

This is one of the loveliest poems I've read in a long time. Thank you for the gift you give.

Marcia

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2011-09-04 02:27 PM

Great poetry!

"Soft invisible wings
cling to my heartbeats,
emotions expand
into ripples of alertness."

Avid desire for sure.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2011-09-04 05:45 PM

To paraphrase Dark, you are Love personnified, Margherita! Exquisite art and essence of you!

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-09-04 06:07 PM

"You are me, I am you,
look into the mirror
and great your soul
let it dance in your eyes,
reflect All there is
dress your gaze
with the incomparable
fullness of pure beauty."- Margherita

The gift of your words
inspires and encourages love for me and the universe,
Thank you, Thank you,
Ms. E

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

7 posted 2011-09-04 06:23 PM

Margherita,

Before I open your poems, I know that they will fill me with beauty and love. It's a no-brainer. You are beauty and love ~ and this poem is one more gift that you have shared with us.

Love,
Alison

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-09-04 06:44 PM

I agree with Alison... I open your poems with a sense of wonder, knowing that beauty and love wait within!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2011-09-04 09:30 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Haf_Alive
Member

since 2011-09-04

Posts 56
High in the Sky

10 posted 2011-09-04 09:51 PM

the title is PERFECT!!! unreal how you use your words to create such depth. so glad i read this. thanks

HAF

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

11 posted 2011-09-04 10:19 PM

You took the reader on a sensuous-time-line quest, and one that was even more profound the second time I read it. Profound is the word.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2011-09-05 03:17 AM

Your poems always fill me with wonder and complete awe, Margherita. Always beautiful.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

13 posted 2011-09-05 02:14 PM

Hi Margherita, I very love the truth and the complexity of the poem and its sensations about an inside outside world, your poem is brilliant and enlighning, thanks a lot

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2011-09-06 06:23 AM

Dear D., I try to put that passion into words and to share it. Thank you so much for enjoying this and telling me so.

Thank you, dear Faith, for your very kind and warm comment and for loving it in its wholeness.

Dear Marcia, again I feel humbled by your remark. The gift is reciprocal, dear Poetess.
Thank you!

Thank you, dear JL, for your generous comment. I enjoy your reviews.

Dear Diana, you see me with your own love-eyes, dear friend. In our essence we are all equally loving, but we do not always trust the inner whispers that actually try to get this message through all the time. Thank you so much and ... I think the same of you.

I love what you say, dear Eg, if you are inspired then you become the gift. Thank you so much.

Dear Alison, thank you from my heart for your loving comment. I always read (besides your fantastic poetry!) your comments, also on other poets' offerings, because you put the heart into them, then you add, according to the case, compassion, wit, wisdom etc., that is always so enriching.

Dear Ruth, you too, always say such nice things, which fill my heart with joy. Thank you dearly!

Dear James, it's always a pleasure to have you reading and commenting! Thank you so much.

Dear Luke, thank you for telling me you enjoyed the read and for feeling the core of it.

"sensuous-time-line quest", I love that definition, dear Jerry! Thank you so much for your most kind comment.

Ida dear, it is always such a joy to find you on one of my threads with your generous, loving reviews. Thank you!

Thank you so much, dear Yann, for reading and commenting so kindly. It feels good when you feel too ...

Love and joy to all.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

15 posted 2011-09-08 06:16 PM

Marghertia...This has got to be my all time favorite poem written by you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2011-09-10 06:10 AM

Dear Paul, thank you from my heart for your most loving reply!

Love and joy.
Margherita

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