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Open Poetry #47

Open to the whispers of Universe (haiku)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2011-09-07 10:32 AM

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Spontaneity:

merging with the cosmic flow

free from all beliefs

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-07 10:36 AM

To be truly free
The barks of dogs should be shunned
A smile is needed

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-07 10:42 AM

Universal tongue:
all living beings may speak
heart smiles help discern

Thank you, dear Jerry!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-09-07 11:08 AM

Love it!
Lori

chickoo007
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 70
India

4 posted 2011-09-07 12:20 PM

Aftr readn ur haiku ( its amazing !) even i wanna write one ... but i just never can :'(:'(:'(

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2011-09-07 03:37 PM

My kind of freedom, Margherita.
Ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2011-09-07 04:06 PM

Nice Haiku.

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2011-09-07 05:18 PM

Losing spontaneity is a cruel thing that happens to us when we grow up...Lucky for me I still am capable of it, seeing as I am still a boy inside, though a bit wrinkled on the out..

Wonderful poem...:-)

"Spontaneity:
merging with the cosmic flow
free from all beliefs"

Floating without gravity
Drifting slow towards Shambala

Please forgive me, Margherita
I just had a spontaneious impulse to make it into a tanka.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2011-09-07 09:39 PM

Beautiful picture, beautiful poem... beautiful responses! *S*

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2011-09-10 06:12 AM

I intensely enjoyed every comment. They are truly generous and most loving. THANK YOU ALL!

Love,
Margherita

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