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Under his spell
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Under his spell |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Under his spell In the rain she walks and talks with a soft tremor on her lips and a dreamy smile full of hints. Myriads of tiny raindrops absorb and reflect her truth in the furtive run over her face. In rivulets of aching desire her secret flows to the ground receptive like a fertile womb ready to stir with new life and treasure the seeds of love to make them burst open and grow into flower songs in colors all new to the eye. She has welcomed him within the silken walls of her heart though their souls had danced across the ether since forever. The butterflies in her belly-sky sometimes leave her breathless her song transforms into sighs she surrenders closing her eyes. She hurries then to meet him upon their very own meadow where only their footsteps are known. It still rains but the sun is piercing through to make their kiss as memorable as a sudden double rainbow that frames all the earthly beauty and makes all life bow in awe. She can’t storm his heart castle and she can’t tiptoe out of it either she quite simply is under his spell. He roams freely under her skin she is not tied to him with strings but she knows and feels the reality of being one with him eternally. * |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Beautiful combination of nature and sensual relationship. The visuals were stirring. I enjoyed this very much! Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Lori, for enjoying the visuals together with me! Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Amazing poetry. I shall return for a second read. The character the poem is written about has wandered into a lover's limbo. She knows it. She understands it. She is as one with it. I like the truthfulness and reality of this, because there are many situations like this, and some might criticize, but if she is happy with what she has, and she is, that is all that is needed so she can hold her head up with the best of the naysayers. ~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"In rivulets of aching desire her secret flows to the ground receptive like a fertile womb ready to stir with new life and treasure the seeds of love to make them burst open and grow into flower songs in colors all new to the eye." This is why I love poetry. This is what I come to see when I see you have posted. This is why the earth is a woman This is why the sky is man This explains the zeyphr, This explain why he must spread the rain as seed. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Margherita...your words are soul expanding. Love, Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She can’t storm his heart castle and she can’t tiptoe out of it either she quite simply is under his spell. I think these are my favorite lines in this beautiful whole... they went straight to my heart! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read and read...one of your best...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Love the picture of God's promise in his creation. "She can’t storm his heart castle and she can’t tiptoe out of it either she quite simply is under his spell." Intriguing write Margarita. Enjoyed. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your beautiful poem, Margherita, spellbound, Ms. E |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
WOWWWW! Beautiful and very touching, a keeper for sure! Loved it! Kat >^..^< |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It has occured to me that perhaps we create our own reality. If that is so you are a lucky women, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, one by one, for your heartwarming, generous, wonderful comments. Right now I do not have the time to address each of you individually. Forgive me, but know how much I enjoyed every visit and touch of yours. Love, Margherita |
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