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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-08-26 05:50 PM



Until My Heart Fails

Missing you
and not
kissing you
strikes my heart
like a two
edged sword.
How long
will this go on,
how much more
can I take,
not much more
until my heart fails,
at this time there's
too much at stake.

JamesLee
26August
2011







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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2011-08-26 06:02 PM


Trust your heart to endure the waiting and let it beat joyously in anticipation. It will accelerate her return, I am sure!

Heartwrenching, dear James!

Love,
Margherita


ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
2 posted 2011-08-26 09:27 PM


James, feeling your pain, will ask Him to comfort you.
Ms. E

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2011-08-29 02:28 AM


Such simply words, yet so well expressed. Fine writing, James.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

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