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Jealous Eyes |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Her confidence pheromoned the room the moment her stiletto heeled foot graced the doorway Hungerlust slicked her steps As she strutted her come hither past eyes entranced Even the ladies eyelashes batted at the unexpected attraction to her sensuous sways She slid onto the barstool baring a lot of leg and thigh She sat with her back to the mirror looking out over her sea of eyes Then deliberately slow she slipped her long silk scarf off one scented shoulder then the next Finally revealing ample curves of cleavage captured in a bodice of black lace Leaving nothing to the imagination she wore her elegant next to nothing like a t-shirt and jeans caring less about showing her seams One by one she’d catch their stare Mona Lisa smiling them down searching for those eyes unafraid to look away It didn’t take long before she’d found them hungry as hers She bought them a round and joined them as if they’d met before Little was said because they already knew what they had come for Jealous eyes upon them as they strolled out the door LGR©4/29/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice work, as usual, Lori. ~ Passionate kiss, like spider web, leads to undoing of fly. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thanks Jerry! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, you wrote this so incredibly well. I see her ... and I have seen her before. Love this one, Lori. A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yumm...James |
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dreamgal Member
since 2011-03-17
Posts 442 |
This was good Lori, one of your best i think. I enjoyed. Dreamgal |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Very Cool Poem, Ms. E |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
hey Ms.E thanks for digging this up! glad you liked it. Lori |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I absolutely love your flirtatious nature, and sexy poetry. You set the mood so well, you capture the look and make your characters come alive. Oh so good! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thank you for being able to appreciate that aspect of my writing and letting me know  Lori |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
WOW Lori! Well written, this woman, she must be lonely. Enjoyed your poem, Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This reminds me of one of those old movies of the 1040's. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I guess lonely is one word for it Ms. E  guess ____________________________________________ Hey Ida! Yeah, I can see that too. Thanks you two special people! Lori |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Reminds me of a charcoal artwork from Boris, you painted the picture very well. Fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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