Open Poetry #47 |
White Light |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
White Light And I saw white light burning in effigy and I saw black nights as a lonely entity And I heard hearts beat in perfect harmony and I heard dancing feet dance away from me And I wrote a song for every cold night for everything gone wrong for everything gone right And I felt the breeze sifting through skin and I fell to my knees my heart wide open And I wrote a song for every lost soul for everything that's gone for everyone to be whole And I saw black night turning over me and I saw white lights uncover the mystery And I'll sing until every human life is beautiful and the words are soothing, the tune full of soul for every loser riding the dawn for lost answers for every one out there, you look, you'll find me there trying to uncover white light trying to blow over the cold black nights for everything that's wrong I'll sing until it's made right And I heard hearts beat in perfect unison and I'll feel incomplete until this song is sung And I wrote a song for every hard day for everything gone wrong for everything that's okay And I wrote a song for you and for me and for everything that's gone there's a melody to sing Just sing along just sing along until you write your own song "Use your heart as a weapon and it hurts like heaven" -Coldplay,'Hurts Like Heaven' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a beautiful song you share here, dear Zach ... souldrifter. You give your login name meaning with this one really. Very uplifting and well written. Love and light. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
soul drifter~ I adore reading you, your writing is so refreshing!! It is music to my ears....Truly!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"for everything that's wrong I'll sing until it's made right" Good attitude, nice write. JL |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem/song, could hear the melody, well done, Ms. E |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I absolutely LOVE this, souldrifter. It brought tears to my eyes. And YES, I'll sing along! This is a perfect gem! Owl |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Thank you, everyone, so much! I didn't know anyone would like this so much. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
"And I'll sing until every human life is beautiful and the words are soothing, the tune full of soul for every loser riding the dawn for lost answers for every one out there, you look, you'll find me there trying to uncover white light trying to blow over the cold black nights for everything that's wrong I'll sing until it's made right" such beautiful lines, fine writing. "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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