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Open Poetry #47
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2011-08-23 11:27 AM

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The gray sky
The wind
The rain

Yes
Even this
Left in peace
Is beautiful

Water falling
From wooden eaves


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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2011-08-23 01:30 PM

Yes, those gray, rainy days can bring solace to us when they are in harmony with our sad and/or nostalgic moods – but even when we are happy, their softness and peace and the comforting music of the rain can resonate with our quiver-sensitive appreciation of their beauty.

I have had a really rough day at work today and I find this exquisite poem most soothing.

Owl
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2011-08-24 06:06 AM

Can imagine myself standing under the wooden eaves and enjoy the freshness.

Beautiful, yes.

M
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