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Open Poetry #47

Wind

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2011-08-23 05:39 AM

Wind chimes sing,
The wind is blowing too calm
For happy;
The heat of the day lingers
As night comes.

Gloom

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-08-23 04:47 PM

You capture the faint sounds in a silent night so eloquently.

Your gloom is quite lovely here.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-08-24 05:06 AM

the wind, the wind chime's song, the heat, the night ... and you, receptive and open to the concert.

You are alive, gloomy Poet, not passive, you have written a beautiful poem.

Love,
Margherita

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