Open Poetry #47 |
This Side of The Evening |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
This Side of The Evening On this side of the evening there's a mongrel love slippin' down my chest and this rearview mirror shows things not so close, but too close to guess I leave it all with the rest the things I'm leaving behind in the morning On the other side of love I have found despair tapping it's talon toe come to claw me up drop me in the morning , searching high and low for all the heart and soul this lithium sunrise in a bottle of morning Long and winding, ever do I keep finding this road filled with tears and recriminations why do you have to bleed to feel the sensation oh baby you know somehow you always know From this side of daylight standing, eyes wide open and ready to give in this funhouse mirror I see her lies and truths I must somehow forgive else how can I ever live being dragged down by this heart in mourning Old and so tired, my jets all but fired this road has wounded my tire tread heart why'd you have to destroy just to reset restart oh darlin' I know somehow you'll always go And this side of the evening there's a mongrel love that's yet to be tamed and these tears in the mirror reflecting things so cold, they need to be inflamed but I'll leave it for tomorrow in this side of the evening I'll take off without a warning leaving this town far behind by the morning "Use your heart as a weapon and it hurts like heaven" -Coldplay,'Hurts Like Heaven' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
way cool stuff Zach...great meta's |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Much enjoyed, Soul Drifter. Lovely but very sad. Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Long and winding, ever do I keep finding this road filled with tears and recriminations why do you have to bleed to feel the sensation oh baby you know somehow you always know ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dig it!!! |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, the feel of city/goings-on of nighttime..enjoyed..spiros |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"And this side of the evening there's a mongrel love that's yet to be tamed and these tears in the mirror reflecting things so cold, they need to be inflamed but I'll leave it for tomorrow in this side of the evening I'll take off without a warning leaving this town far behind by the morning" Wow. Very nice, back in the day I might say Heavy man... JL |
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