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Open Poetry #47

an autumn meeting

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

0 posted 2011-01-05 02:57 AM

we met one autumn day just as the season began to ripen on the trees,
and a slight chill weaved its way into the trailing summer strands of warm
sunny breezes, i remember looking into your eyes for the first time as you
walked by and at that moment the rustling autumn leaves began to whisper
as they floated gentle pass my heart .

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2011-01-05 04:00 AM

First meetings are often times stamp into our subconscious forever.

Born Free........Taxed to Death

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2011-01-05 04:45 AM

Beautiful thoughts on that first meeting, mikeandrew.
Ida

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-01-05 02:32 PM

That's beautiful!!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

4 posted 2011-01-08 12:05 PM

truly, a lovely write...I especially liked the following:
"a slight chill weaved its way into the trailing summer strands"

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-01-08 12:19 PM

this poem captures the moment so well...very beautifully done and so romantic!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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