Open Poetry #47 |
Heart Surely Knows |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Heart Surely Knows Oh my love I miss you so much that I could cry. Missing you yet not knowing why you won't come to me has given me a life of misery. Surely you must have your reasons (tell me please) and perhaps the truth I will never know so although I can never say goodbye my heart surely knows I must let you go. JamesLee 20August 2011 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is an ache I've known... my heart goes out to you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, in their essentiality your words convey so intensely the pain of the heart to which oh so many can relate. And the conclusive thought is so wise, it becomes a lesson. Poignantly beautiful. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
been there, done that (unfortunately) .. succinctly and effectively stated! some of loves 'mysteries' are quite deadly. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ha! Brought back the memory of the 'Dear Jimmy' letter I received when in the Navy, 7,000 miles away... Cool.. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I know that too, nice poem that makes a situation sensitive, yann |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
JL |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
It is never easy to let go, like you, I know the feeling. Well written James, Ms. E |
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