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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-08-20 10:26 PM


Heart Surely Knows

Oh my love
I miss you
so much
that I could cry.
Missing you
yet not knowing why
you won't come to me
has given me
a life of misery.

Surely you must
have your reasons
(tell me please)
and perhaps the truth
I will never know
so although I can
never say goodbye
my heart surely knows
I must let you go.

JamesLee
20August
2011





  

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suthern
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1 posted 2011-08-20 11:12 PM


This is an ache I've known... my heart goes out to you.
Margherita
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2 posted 2011-08-21 04:55 AM


Dear James, in their essentiality your words convey so intensely the pain of the heart to which oh so many can relate. And the conclusive thought is so wise, it becomes a lesson.

Poignantly beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2011-08-21 07:28 PM


been there, done that (unfortunately) ..

succinctly and effectively stated!

some of loves 'mysteries' are quite deadly.

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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4 posted 2011-08-21 10:42 PM


Ha! Brought back the memory of the 'Dear Jimmy' letter I received when in the Navy, 7,000 miles away...

Cool..

j.

2islander2
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5 posted 2011-08-22 01:33 AM


I know that too, nice poem that makes a situation sensitive,


yann

JL
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6 posted 2011-08-26 02:29 PM





JL



ebonygirl
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7 posted 2011-08-26 09:42 PM


It is never easy to let go, like you, I know the feeling.
Well written James,
Ms. E

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